Critiques-Wanted

*Our story takes place in the forest, the trees and grass are lush and green, the area is flourishing with flowers, and the sound of wildlife fills the air* *Here, we see Dawn walking down the dirt trail, she is wearing a white tank top, dark blue jeans, and black hiking boots, she is also carrying a backpack* *She takes a deep breath of the fresh air and sighs* Dawn: Welp, time to start my survival training! *She makes her way down the path* *She's enjoying herself as the wind blows through her hair, the sun shines on her skin, and she hears the sound of birds chirping* Dawn: *sighs* Sure is beautiful.. *As she's walking around, she suddenly notices something on the trail* Dawn: Huh? *She walks towards the thing on the trail, and gets down on her knees to examine it* *Upon closer examination, she realizes that the thing is a footprint* *The footprint appears to belong to a canine of some sort, was it a dog perhaps, or was it something else..?* Dawn: Hmm... *She suddenly