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Sasha's Clown Doll from Face Off by VampiresaQueen
Princess of Darkness, Burilda (Princess Tutu OC) by VampiresaQueen
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Whitney and the Katana by GotADraw
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Figure Drawing #1 by GotADraw
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Kylie Dear In Poppy Playtime. by Venicequeen1011
Mason-Dixon Peace by GotADraw
Lily Herbertson. by Venicequeen1011
Tasha McJingle. by Venicequeen1011
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wolf howl by Chardimanphotography
just a bee by noobography
Smoke by Ilya245
Braveheart by Ilya245
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Akela by Chardimanphotography
Akela by Chardimanphotography
welcome said the spider by noobography
butterfly by noobography
Literature
Lone Wolf.*Our story takes place in the forest, the trees and grass are lush and green, the area is flourishing with flowers, and the sound of wildlife fills the air* *Here, we see Dawn walking down the dirt trail, she is wearing a white tank top, dark blue jeans, and black hiking boots, she is also carrying a backpack* *She takes a deep breath of the fresh air and sighs* Dawn: Welp, time to start my survival training! *She makes her way down the path* *She's enjoying herself as the wind blows through her hair, the sun shines on her skin, and she hears the sound of birds chirping* Dawn: *sighs* Sure is beautiful.. *As she's walking around, she suddenly notices something on the trail* Dawn: Huh? *She walks towards the thing on the trail, and gets down on her knees to examine it* *Upon closer examination, she realizes that the thing is a footprint* *The footprint appears to belong to a canine of some sort, was it a dog perhaps, or was it something else..?* Dawn: Hmm... *She suddenly hears the sound of howling in the distance* *This wasn't a normal howl however, it didn't sound canine..it sounded more...human* Dawn: Huh!? *She stands up and looks for the source of the sound, only to find nothing but trees and shrubs* Dawn: Th--That sounded like- *She then hears the sound of the shrubs rustling behind her* *Upon turning around, she is greeted by the sight of a frightening, but surprisingly sharply dressed bear* *The bear roars at her* *Dawn screams in terror before immediately running away from the large predator* *The bear snarls and gives chase* *Dawn runs as fast as she can, hoping she can get away from this ferocious beast* *She keeps looking around for any sign of civilization, or at least a forest ranger, but no one is around* *She becomes more and more frightened as she hears the bear behind her* *While running, her foot hits a rock on the trail* *She screams as she falls, and grunts in pain upon hitting the cold, unforgiving ground* *She props herself up and rubs her head* *That's when she hears a low gutteral growling sound behind her* *Her face goes pale, and tears well up in her eyes* *She turns to see the bear standing right in front of her* *Dawn screams in fear and shuffles herself away from the creature, but she looks to see that there's no where to run, as a wall of rocks is behind her* *She let's out a terrified sob as it sinks in that she's done for* *The bear roars at her and raises their right paw, ready to attack* *Dawn slams her eyes shut and screams in horror* *Before the bear can lay a claw on her though, a wolf rushes out of the bushes and jumps at the bear, sinking their teeth into the bear's shoulder* *The bear roars in pain, and tries to pry the wolf out of their shoulder* *The wolf growls in resistance* *Dawn slowly opens her eyes in confusion, but before she can even question why she's still alive, she turns her attention to the fight at hand* *The bear swats their right paw at the wolf, and slashes them off of her* *The wolf yelps in pain as they hit the ground* *The wolf glares at the bear and snarls at it* *The bear snarls at the wolf, angered by the injury they had given them* *The wolf jumps at the bear again, looking to cause more damage* *Dawn cannot believe what she's seeing, her eyes stare wide in shock as she sees the two creatures battle each other* *Several scratches, slashes, and bites are exchanged between the two, but ultimately the wolf comes out on top, after they deliver a nasty bite to the bear's thigh* *The bear roars in pain and swats the wolf off of them* *Frustrated and defeated, the bear runs away crying* *Dawn breathes heavily as she tries to process what just happened* *The wolf props themself off of the ground and starts licking their wounds* Dawn: Whoa... *The wolf turns their attention to the frightened girl, their eyes go wide in surprise* Dawn: Huh? *The wolf stares in disbelief at the girl, almost like they recognized her* *We are then treated to a flashback through a first person perspective of someone standing at a water stand, looking at Dawn as she smiles at them and hands them a water bottle* *Dawn: Here you go, have a wonderful day! *She says in a cheerful tone* ???: *I--It's her..* *the wolf thinks to themself* Dawn: Um.. *The wolf's face immediately changes from a look of disbelief to a look of solemn* ???: Oh it's you.. *The wolf spoke in a male voice* Dawn: Huh!? *Her eyes go wide at the wolf's words* ???: Well don't get too excited, that bear and I just had some... unfinished business.. Dawn: Uh-I uh.. ???: What, haven't you ever seen a wolf before? *At first Dawn didn't know how to feel, but then she realized this wasn't a normal wolf, it was one of the guys she cursed at the zoo* Dawn: *She gasps in delight* *She smiles at him* *The wolf's face changes from it's solemn expression to a look of uncomfortableness* ???: Why're you looking at me like..with that weird gleam in your eye? Dawn: *She giggles a little* *The wolf's expression went from uncomfort to nervous as he realized the situation he'd put himself in* ???: Don't tell me you're going to keep bothering me! *He looks down in annoyance* FML...! *Dawn's expression changes from happy to nervous and immediately changes her tune* Dawn: O-Oh! *She clears her throat* S-Sorry! I was just excited, I didn't think I'd experience anything like that in my life! *The wolf looks at her for a split second, but then turns away* Dawn: Th-Thank you for saving my life, I really- ???: D-Don't mention it..please.. Dawn: I.. I'd like to repay you actually. ???: Repay me? Dawn: You know, for saving my life. ???: Thanks but.. I'll pass.. *The wolf turns to walk away* Dawn: W-Wait! Please don't go! *The wolf starts to walk away* Dawn: Uh! Please wait! I--I can make you human again! *This immediately catches the wolf's attention* *His eyes go wide in surprise upon hearing those words* ???: ....What did you say..? Dawn: ...M-Me and my friend, we're trying to break the curse! *The wolf slowly looks back at her* Dawn: I-I know I messed up, I should've payed attention to what I was doing, but I was too busy daydreaming to realize the damage I was doing. *The wolf slowly turns and looks at her in disbelief* Dawn: B-But I wanna fix my mistakes, I wanna break this curse, I may not know everything about it, but I really wanna try..please, please let me try to help you.. *The wolf whines a little, he doesn't know whether to believe her, but then again..she could be telling the truth* *The wolf walks towards her* ???: How do I know you're not lying to me? Dawn: N-No! I swear on my life I'm not, let lightning strike me if I am! *The wolf takes a moment to think about it* *He then turns his attention back to Dawn* ???: Ok.. You can try.. but if this turns out to be a trick, you're gonna get bit. Dawn: Oh thank you, you won't regret it! ???: Let's hope so.. *He says to himself* Dawn: My name is Dawnabelle by the way, but you can call me Dawn! What's your name? *Although reluctant to answer, the wolf eventually gives her the answer she desires* ???: Volks... my name is Volks.. Dawn: Volks? Volks... that's a nice name. Volks: H-Huh? Dawn: *She smiles at him* *Dawn stands up and dusts herself off* Dawn: Come with me, I can take you to my house, you must be cold and hungry after being out here in the woods for so long. *She starts to walk away* *Volks turns and stares at her, still concerned whether he should trust her or not* *Dawn turns and gives him a reassuring smile* Dawn: Come on, i-if you want to I mean. *Volks takes a moment to think, although he feels unsure, he also feels that if there's a chance to become human again, he should probably take it* Volks: *He let's out an exasperated sigh* Ok.. *Volks walks towards Dawn and the two walk away into the distance* *They had no idea what this quest would have in store for them* (The End) Volks belongs to ©Sad Panda Studios. Dawn Valentine belongs to Me.
Spirits Of The Past: A Walk In The Woods.*Our story takes place on a dark night, the wind was howling, and the moon was shining bright* *We see The Spiritual Hunters headquarters* *Inside the place, we see Kylie putting on her coat* *We see Goofy sitting on the couch, watching TV* *Kylie walks past the couch, which gains the attention of the clumsy canine* Goofy: Hm? *Kylie walks towards the front door and grabs the handle* Goofy: Where're ya goin', Kylie? Kylie: Hm? *She turns her attention towards him* Kylie: Oh! I'm just gonna take a walk. Goofy: In the middle of the night? I thought you hated walkin' through the woods at night. Kylie: I do..But the night sprites are out tonight, and I wanna see if I can catch some. *Goofy whines in concern* Kylie: Goofy.. *She walks towards Goofy and pulls him into a hug* *Goofy hugs her back* Goofy: Please be careful.. Kylie: I'll be as careful as I can be. Goofy: Promise? Kylie: I promise. *She pulls herself out of the worried canine's arms* Kylie: I'll be back ok? *She kisses him on the cheek* Bye. *She walks away* Goofy: Bye.. *He whines in worry* *Later that night* *We see Kylie walking through the woods, carrying a flashlight in her right hand* *She's humming to herself, minding her own business when suddenly, she hears the sound of a twig snap* *She gasps and turns around, pointing her flashlight in the direction the sound came from* *There doesn't appear to be anything in sight, except a bunch of trees, bushes, and some floral life* *She then hears the sound of footsteps* *She immediately starts looking around* Kylie: Who's there? *She hears no response* Kylie: Goofy I swear to gosh, if that's yo- *The bushes start rustling* *Kylie gasps in fear and steps away from the bushes* *Suddenly, a deer emerges from the bushes* *Kylie sighs in relief* Kylie: It's just a deer. *The deer stands still, staring at her* Kylie: Man, you sure gave me quite a fright. Heh, I guess I'm so used to supernatural stuff that I forgot that normal stuff exi- *That's when she notices that the deer has a blank, lifeless look in it's eyes* *This causes her to feel a sudden feeling of dread* Kylie: Wait a minute... *She cautiously bends down and grabs a stick off of the ground* *She then carefully moves the stick towards the deer, and gently pokes it with the stick* *In a split second the deer's muzzle splits open, revealing a large mouth full of sharp, jagged teeth* *The deer snaps at the cautious brunette, causing her to scream and jump back in shock* Kylie: Holy fudgarama on a stick!! *In that moment, the deer's body contorts into a more anthropomorphic appearance, gaining human like hands which are accompanied by razor sharp claws, it's torso is mangled and boney, and it's fur reeks of the dead* *It admits a low gutteral snarl as it's muzzle splits open, revealing it's gruesome teeth, it's salvia is red with the blood of it's previous victim* *Kylie screams in horror and immediately makes a run for it* *The "deer" snarls and immediately gives chase* *She runs as fast as she can, praying she'd be able to escape this fearsome foe* Kylie: Oh gosh no, oh gosh no! *She hears the fearsome footsteps of the "deer" behind her* *She hears the sound of it's snarling in the distance, but it's soon replaced by the sound of her own rapid heartbeat* *Tears welled up in her eyes, so many thoughts ran through her head, thoughts of how stupid she was for leaving her weapons at home, thoughts of what this creature would do to her if it managed to catch her, thoughts of the people she cared for, and how she prayed that she would live to see them for at least one more day* *While caught up in her thoughts, Kylie failed to see the rock in her path* *She screams in shock as she trips and falls onto the cold, unforgiving ground* *She groans as she props herself up* *She hears the low gutteral growling of the "deer"* *She gasps in fear and looks up to see the "deer" standing over her, bloodied salvia dripping from it's mouth* *Tears fall from her eyes* Kylie: Oh my gosh no, no! *The "deer" goes to attack her* *Kylie screams in horror, fearing that this was the end for her* *Suddenly, something jumps out of the shadows and tackles the "deer"* *The creature pins the "deer" to the ground and snarls at it* *The two engage in a battle, with the "deer" trying to tear it's opponent to shreds, and the creature trying to defend itself from the "deer's" attacks* *Kylie slowly opens her eyes and looks upon the battle in front of her* *She gasps in shock at the sudden turn of events* *She couldn't really make out the silhouette of the other creature, but what she could see was that it was a large creature, about 8'2. if she had to guess, and it had dark, ruffled fur, possibly ruffled from the fight at hand* *The "deer" tried to slash at it's opponent, but the creature quickly retaliated by biting the "deer" in the shoulder* *The "deer" let out an ear piercing, agonized roar* *Kylie gasped in shock at the sight of this* *The creature then picked up the "deer", swung it around, and then sent it hurling through the air far into the night, completely out of sight* *Kylie stared in shock, or maybe it was amazement? She didn't know how to feel* Kylie: Whoa.. *The creature then seemed to turn it's attention towards her* *Her face immediately turned pale* Kylie: Oh gosh no! *It makes it's way towards her* Kylie: No no no! *She tries to run away, but the creature grabbed her before she could even get up* *She screamed in terror, tears started falling from her eyes* *Just when she thought she was done for, the creature wrapped it's big, burly arms around her from behind* *Kylie's eyes shot open, why wasn't it attacking her?* *The creature placed it's head on her shoulder, it held her gently in it's arms, was it..protecting her?* *She should've felt afraid, but she strangely felt safe.. the creature's touch felt strangely comforting.. and familiar..* Kylie: Wh-Wha..? *After what felt like almost five minutes, the creature finally let go of her* *It seemed to stare at her for a few seconds before rushing off into the darkness* *Kylie stared in confusion, she didn't know what to make of this* Kylie: Wh--What was that all about!? *She immediately stands up and dusts herself off* Kylie: Y-You know what? I'll just catch some night sprites another night, I-I think I've had enough action for one night.. *And with that, she grabbed her flashlight from off the ground, and started walking home* (The End) Goofy Goof belong to ©Disney. Kylie Dear belongs to Me.
M.A.T.S.H Ep 2: The Beastly Bell.*Our story begins late at night, in a dark spooky forest* *We hear a haunting chime of a bell in the distance* *We see Kylie running around the forest, she seems to be horrified* Kylie: Oh gosh, oh gosh..! *She starts desperately looking around* *She runs and hides behind a tree* *We hear approaching footsteps, as well as chiming from a bell* *Kylie's face goes pale* *Something snarls and slashes at the tree* *Kylie runs away screaming in horror* *As she's running, we hear the sound of snarling, as well as the bell chiming* *Kylie then trips on a rock in the path, she grunts in pain upon hitting the ground* Kylie: *groans* *We see a shadow loom over her, as well as hear the same snarling sound from before* *Kylie reluctantly turns around, and screams in horror upon gazing at the creature* *Everything suddenly freezes* *Kylie: This, is me... I think it's apparent that I'm in a bit of a pickle at the moment.. what's my problem?* *We cut to a different scene* *We see the silver van driving down a country road* *Kylie: Well it all started when we took a certain case, an elderly lady had called us about a disturbance at her house* *We see a white farmhouse in the distance* *Kylie: We thought this would be a simple yet fun one.. but boy were we wrong* *The van parks in front of the house* *One of the doors to the van opens, and Kylie gets out and looks around the area* *The area is a bit foggy, but we can make out a dark red barn a few feet away from the farmhouse, the ground is cover in small stones, and there's a path leading to the forest, but what stands out the most is a pole with a silver bell hanging off of it's hook* Kylie: Dang.. creepy, but still kinda welcoming. *She looks into the van* Kylie: Everybody got their equipment ready? *We see Mickey, Donald, and Goofy sitting inside the van* Mickey: Sure do, Kylie. Kylie: Great, let's go greet our client. *Kylie closes the door to her side of the van, and the others exit the van as well* *The gang walks towards the farmhouse* *Once they approach the house, Kylie knocks on the door* *We hear footsteps approaching the door* *We hear a muffled voice behind the door* ???: Yes? Mickey: Hello, we're The Spiritual Hunters. Goofy: The best paranormal investigators in all of Enchantasia! Kylie: *giggles* Thank you Goofy, um..anyways, is Mrs.Darnell home? We got a call about a disturbance here. *The door immediately opens, and we're greeted by an elderly woman with grayish white hair, pale skin, and sky blue eyes, she wears her hair in a bun, and she wears a floral patterned dress, with a lilac cardigan* ???: Yes, I'm Mrs.Darnell. *She frantically looks around the area, before turning her attention back to the gang* Mrs.Darnell: Oh please do come in, hurry! Donald: Ok..? *The gang walks into the house, and Mrs.Darnell closes the door* Goofy: What's the big rush? Mrs.Darnell: Oh I'm so glad you could make it. Donald: Thank you, we take pride in arriving on time. Mrs.Darnell: Huh? Kylie: He says we take pride in arriving on time. *Donald grumbles under his breath* Mrs.Darnell: Oh please, do make yourself at home. Kylie: Ok. *Mrs.Darnell leads the gang into her living room, and invites the gang to have a seat* Mrs.Darnell: Have a seat. *Kylie, Mickey, and Donald sit on the couch, while Goofy sits in one of the chairs* *Mrs.Darnell sits in one of the chairs as well* Kylie: So what seems to be the trouble? Mrs.Darnell: Well.. This problem has been going on for a while, something keeps coming onto my property, and causing a disturbance. Mickey: Could you possibly describe the creature to us? *Mrs.Darnell doesn't say anything, she just looks down at the floor* *The gang express concern for the woman* Goofy: Is it too terrifyin' to describe? Mrs.Darnell: Very... *We then hear a haunting bell chime, which seems to be coming from outside* *Mrs.Darnell gives an exasperated sigh and turns her attention to the gang* Mrs.Darnell: Could one of you check on the bell outside for me please? It bothers me at night. *Kylie gets up from her seat* Kylie: I'll do it, Mrs.Darnell. Mrs.Darnell: Oh thank you, Dear. *And with that, Kylie walks away* *Mrs.Darnell turns her attention to the rest of the gang* Mrs.Darnell: Do you boys want some hot cocoa? I had just made some before you arrived. Goofy: Oh boy do I! Donald: Yes please! Mickey: Yes please, Mrs.Darnell. *Kylie's POV* *We see Kylie exit the farmhouse, she looks around the area looking for the bell* *We hear the haunting sound of the bell again* *Kylie sees the bell in the distance, and walks towards it* *That's when she notices something strange........ the bell isn't ringing...in fact, it isn't moving at all* Kylie: Huh? *She hears the haunting chime again, this time louder than before, but the bell doesn't move* *She stares at the bell in confusion* Kylie: But... the bell isn't moving. *That's when we see a creature behind her, it's a tall creature with a boney but slightly muscular body, it had arched, skinny legs, and clawed hands, it has long, goblin like ears, horn like protrusions on it's head, four tusks on it's chin, and golden eyes, but what stood out the most were it's sharp, jagged teeth, one of the fangs had a bell tied around it* *The creature snarled at Kylie, causing the clueless brunette to turn around* *She stares at the creature in horror, before screaming in pure shock and horror* *The creature tries to grab Kylie, but she rushes away before it could even touch her* *It snarls in frustration, angered that it's meal ran away from it* *We see Kylie rushing towards the farmhouse* *Mickey comes outside upon hearing the screaming, and is shocked to see Kylie running towards the place* Mickey: Kylie what's wro-!? Kylie: Bell secure, going in!! *Kylie rushes past Mickey, but she quickly grabs Mickey by the collar of his lab coat, and pulls him inside* Mickey: Whoa!! *Kylie slams the door, locks it, and barricades it with a chair* *She then takes a moment to take a breather* Mickey: Kylie, what's wrong, what happened out there? *Kylie babbles frantically and nonsensically, clearly panicking, she then sobs for a split second* *Concerned for his friend, Mickey hugs the frightened brunette and pats her on the back* Mickey: There there, it's alright.. Kylie: No it's not..! *She says with a broken voice* Mickey: Kylie, what did you see out there? Kylie: I--It was this tall goblin like creature! I-It was all boney and weird looking, it's teeth were sharp and jagged, it was salivating- *she says in a panicky tone* Mickey: Kylie calm down, take a breath. *Kylie takes a deep breath, and sighs* Kylie: I'm calm... Mickey: Good, now you said it was a tall, goblin like creature? Kylie: Yes, and it had a bell tied around it's right big fang. *Mickey's eyes go wide in disbelief* Mickey: A bell? Kylie: Yeah, that bell that was ringing outside, that wasn't the bell on the pole, that was the creature! Mickey: Oh gee... *He says in disbelief* Kylie: *gulps* We've gotta warn the others! *Kylie walks towards the living room with Mickey following behind her* *When they get into the living room, they see Donald and Goofy sitting down, drinking hot chocolate, but there's no sign of Mrs.Darnell* Mickey: Hey guys. *Kylie's face goes pale* Kylie: Wh-Where's Mrs.Darnell? Donald: She went upstairs. *He says without looking away from his hot chocolate* *Donald then goes back to drinking his hot chocolate* Kylie: *gulps* *Kylie immediately runs away to look for Mrs.Darnell* *Goofy takes notice to his sweetheart's distressed behavior, and becomes concerned* *Goofy turns his attention to Mickey* Goofy: Is Kylie ok? Mickey: *sighs* She saw a monster when she went outside the farmhouse.. *Donald spits out his hot chocolate, and Goofy yelps in shock and fear* Donald and Goofy: A MONSTER!? Mickey: Yeah, it must've been a truly terrifying one too, because Kylie came in whiter than a sheet of snow. Donald: Well I'll be doggone.. *Kylie's POV* *We see Kylie run towards the staircase, and rush up the stairs* Kylie: Mrs.Darnell! *When she gets up the stairs, Kylie looks around frantically* *That's when she sees a light emanating from one of the doors* *Kylie immediately heads towards the room* Kylie: Mrs.Darnell! *Kylie opens the door, hoping Mrs.Darnell would still be in one piece, only to see her sitting in a rocking chair, watching TV* Kylie: Mrs.Darnell? Mrs.Darnell: Kylie... Please have a seat, I wish to tell you something.. Kylie: Um...Ok? *Kylie walks towards the chair next to Mrs.Darnell, and sits down* Mrs.Darnell: I'm going to tell you a family secret, something I've kept hidden for a long time.. Kylie: How long exactly..? *Mrs.Darnell gives a sorrowful sigh* Mrs.Darnell: Since I was a young girl.. __Flashback__ *We see a family of eight, a father, a mother, and their six children, eating dinner at the dining table* *Mrs.Darnell: It happened on a warm summer night, me, my parents, and my siblings, Arlo, Cedric, Rachel, Ella, and Molly were sitting around the table eating dinner* Molly: Could you pass the potatoes, Mummy? ??: Yes Sweetie. *The mother goes to grab the pot that the mashed potatoes are in* *Mrs.Darnell: That's when we heard it* *The haunting bell chime is heard* *Mrs.Darnell: The bell had started to ring, but there were no heavy winds that day* *Kylie: Oh gosh..* ???: Arlo, could you check on the bell please? Arlo: Yes father. *Arlo gets up from his seat and walks away* *Mrs.Darnell: So with that, my brother got a candle and went outside to see what was going on with the bell* *Kylie: Wait wait wait wait wait, your dad sent your BROTHER to check on the bell!? Why didn't he go himself!?* *Mrs.Darnell: Keep listening..* *Kylie: Ok ok, sorry* *Mrs.Darnell: So with that, my brother went outside to check on the bell, it kept ringing at first, but suddenly..* *The bell stops ringing* *The family turns their attention towards the window* *Mrs.Darnell: Silence...* *They see the light from Arlo's candle in the distance* *Mrs.Darnell: All we saw was the light from my brother's candle.. until..* *The light from the candle vanishes, all that was seen in that moment was pure darkness* *Mrs.Darnell: It went out..* *Kylie: Oh crud..* *Mrs.Darnell: And then, the bell started ringing again..* *We hear the haunting chime of the bell again* *The family is visibly, and understandably concerned, except for the father, who seems to be a bit skeptical* *We then cut back to the real world* Mrs.Darnell: Convinced that Arlo was simply playing a trick, my father then sent Cedric outside.. *A look of shock and disbelief appears on Kylie's face* Kylie: He what!? *In that moment, we see Mickey, Donald, and Goofy walk outside the farmhouse, holding their equipment in their hands* *Mrs.Darnell: Holding another candle in his hand, he went outside to see what was going on..* *Mickey turns on his flashlight, and looks around* Donald: Uh...Are you sure about this, Mickey? I-If Kylie came inside looking whiter than a sheet of snow, who knows what we're up against! Mickey: That may be true, Donald, but remember, we take all kinds of cases, no matter how fearsome the foe is. *Donald groans, he cannot argue with that, it IS in The Spiritual Hunters' policy* *Goofy gets out his dagger, wanting to be prepared in case things get rough* Goofy: L-Let's go look around, fellers. *And with that, the three walked away from the farmhouse* *We then cut back to Kylie and Mrs.Darnell* Mrs.Darnell: Cedric went outside to see what was going on, the bell once again stopped ringing, once again, we were left staring at the flame of Cedric's candle, until..his went out too.. *Kylie's eyes go wide in fear* Kylie: You mean Cedric didn't come back either? *Mrs.Darnell looks down and slowly shakes her head* Kylie: Oh my gosh... *We then cut back to the flashback* *The family seems to be a little worried now, all.. except for the father* *He gives a sigh of annoyance* ???: Rachel, go outside and check on them will you? Rachel: But father- ???: Now Rachel! *Rachel looks away* *She does as her father says, and gets up from her seat* *Mrs.Darnell: Next was Rachel, who just as my brothers did before, grabbed a candle and went outside* *Kylie: I don't believe this..* *Mrs.Darnell: Once again, the bell stopped ringing, and all we saw was the light from Rachel's candle.. until that went out too..* *The whole family seems very worried now, even the father looks mortified* ???: *He clears his throat* Sh-She's fine, those darn kids are playing a trick on us! ??: Honey, I don't think it's a trick! ???: Nonsense! Ella, go check on your siblings, will you? *Not wanting to argue with her father, Ella got up from her seat* Ella: Y-Yes father.. *Mrs.Darnell: Next was my sister Ella, who just as my siblings had done before, grabbed a candle and went outside* *Kylie: L-Let me guess, the bell stopped ringing, the light went out, and she didn't come back* *Mrs.Darnell: Very good..* *We then cut back to Mickey, Donald, and Goofy, who're seen investigating the area* *Mickey is seen scanning the area with his paranormal scanner* *We see Donald and Goofy examining the same area, while doing a little snooping around, the two bump into each other* Donald and Goofy: Ow! *Donald looks up at Goofy, and gives him a look of anger* Donald: Watch where you're going, ya big palooka! Goofy: H'yuck, sorry Donald. *Donald grumbles to himself* *That's when Mickey notices something on the ground* *Some of the stones on the ground have shifted, as if something had ran through this area* *Mickey takes a closer look in the distance* *That's when he sees a dark silhouette in the distance* *The silhouette suddenly rushes off* *Taken aback by this, Mickey goes to tell the others, when suddenly* *Goofy's eyes go wide* *He starts sniffing the air* *Mickey and Donald are visibly confused about this* Donald: What're you doing? *Goofy continues to sniff around* Goofy: I smell somethin'. *Following the smell, Goofy walks away* *Still confused, but knowing it might lead them to something, Mickey and Donald follow their canine companion* *We then cut back to Kylie and Mrs.Darnell* Mrs.Darnell: Even when it was clear that something was wrong, my father still persisted... *We then see Molly leave the house* *Mrs.Darnell: Next it was poor Molly...* *We then see the mother leave* *Mrs.Darnell: And then my mother..* *We can hear in Mrs.Darnell's voice that she's starting to get choked up* *And then, we see the father leave* *Mrs.Darnell: A-And lastly my father..* *We then see a young Mrs.Darnell staring outside, with a scared look on her face* *Mrs.Darnell: I-I kept hoping I would see at least one of them come back.. but it was always the same result..* *We see the light from the father's candle vanish* *Tears well up in the young girl's eyes* *Mrs.Darnell: I was all alone..* *Terrified, the young Mrs.Darnell runs away* *She runs towards one of the cupboards and opens it* *She gets inside the cupboard, and closes the doors* *Mrs.Darnell: Not knowing what to do, I ran and hid inside the cupboard* *Kylie: Smart* *We then cut back to Mickey, Donald, and Goofy* *We see Goofy walking around the area, sniffing around, looking for the source of the mysterious smell* *Mickey and Donald are close behind him, hoping Goofy will lead them to something helpful* Mickey: How close are you, Goofy? Goofy: *He sniffs around* I can tell that we're gettin' closer, the smell's gettin' stronger. *Donald still looks a little freaked out by this* Donald: *Why is he doing that..?* *gulps* *We then cut back to Kylie and Mrs.Darnell* Mrs.Darnell: Everything was quiet..too quiet... then suddenly... I heard that dreaded bell.. *We then cut back to the flashback* *We hear the haunting chime of the bell again* *The young Mrs.Darnell shivers in terror, holding a candle close to her* *Mrs.Darnell: Then, something started pounding at the door* *We hear loud, fearsome pounding coming from the front door* *Tears well up in the young girls eyes* *Mrs.Darnell: And then, there was a loud crash..* *The door breaks opens* *The sound of the door breaking frightens the young girl* *Mrs.Darnell: Something..was in the house with me.. that dreaded bell was in the house with me..* *We hear the sound of the bell ringing rapidly* *We then cut back to Goofy* *The smell leads Goofy behind the barn, he stands visibly confused for a moment, but he presses on* *Mrs.Darnell: It rang in the kitchen..* *We cut back to the flashback* *We see plates fall onto the floor and break upon impact* *We see the young Mrs.Darnell, she has tears falling from her eyes* *Mrs.Darnell: It rang outside, next to the bed* *We hear the chime of the bell getting closer, and closer..* *We then cut back to Goofy* *Goofy continues to follow the mysterious smell* *The smell then hits him like a truck, it was horrendous* *Goofy starts wheezing and gagging, tears fall from his eyes* Goofy: Doggone..! *He manages to say* *That's when he notices something* *We then cut back to the flashback* *Mrs.Darnell: And finally, it rang right outside the cupboard doors..* *We see a dark silhouette approach the cupboard* *The young Mrs.Darnell stays silent* *And then.. it opened..* *The cupboard doors slam open* *We see the young Mrs.Darnell cower in fear* *We then cut back to the real world* Kylie: Y-You saw it didn't you..th-that thing, you saw it didn't you!? Mrs.Darnell: That's not the point.. I'm here, so obviously I survived.. Kylie: Y-Yeah, I know that.. Mrs.Darnell: The thing that had entered my home, hoping to wait out the light from my candle before the crack of dawn, had a bell tied to it's teeth, with a bloodied piece of string, that would ring whenever the creature would open it's mouth to hunt.. *Kylie stares in pure horror and disbelief, she cannot believe what she is hearing* Mrs.Darnell: Some poor heroic soul managed to tie a warning bell to it's teeth before they died.. Kylie: *gulps* Mrs.Darnell: We heard it's haunting sound, and yet my entire family went outside anyway..we didn't listen because we didn't want to listen.. *We then cut back to Goofy* *Goofy looks utterly horrified by what he is seeing* *Goofy whines in fear, tears well up in his eyes* Goofy: Oh gawrsh!! *He says in horror* *We then cut back to Kylie and Mrs.Darnell* Mrs.Darnell: My father knew what he was doing halfway in, but he didn't want to admit what he had already done.. *We then cut back to Goofy* *Goofy steps away in horror, tears fall from his eyes* *Mrs.Darnell: And so he did something worse, and continued feeding it life..* *We see seven skeletons* *The skeletons are old and dusty, almost as if they've been there for years* *We then cut back to Kylie and Mrs.Darnell* Mrs.Darnell: Fear will tell you to put your candle out, but your head will tell you to keep it lit, don't give into fear, you keep it lit, and you'll get through this.. *We then cut back to Goofy* Goofy: Mick!! Donald!! *Mickey and Donald rush toward their canine companion* Mickey: Goofy!? *The two stop as soon as they see the skeletons* Donald: Oh my gosh!! *They stare at the skeletons in horror, all while Goofy is crying in horror* *Mickey has a look of sadness and horror on his face, tears well up in his eyes, he hated to imagine what these poor souls had went through* Mickey: No...no no... *Then, their moment of horror was cut short, when they hear the same haunting bell chime, that they had heard from inside the farmhouse* *Goofy stops crying, his pupils had shrunken during his crying fit* *The three look towards the left* *They hear the sound of the bell getting louder, as if something was getting closer* *We see a clawed hand appear, and slowly drag it's claws across the barn wall* *We then see the beast from before appear from around the corner* *It's growling, it's starts salivating upon seeing the boys* *The boys turn white in horror, whiter than a sheet of snow* *The creature licks it's lips* Donald: *He chuckles at this* Well aren't you a beautiful sight.. *Donald starts laughing crazily, which quickly turns into him sobbing* *Goofy immediately grabs his friends, and dashes away* *The creature exclaims in shock, taken aback by how fast the frightened dog had taken off* *The creature's shock quickly turns into anger, and it roars in rage* *It then gives chase, not wanting to lose it's meal* *We then cut back to Kylie and Mrs.Darnell* Mrs.Darnell: It was a truly devastating night indeed.. *Kylie is seen standing in horror and disbelief* Kylie: Y--Your father...KNEW what was happening... and he STILL let his family die...? *Mrs.Darnell sighs in sorrow* Mrs.Darnell: I'm afraid so... *Kylie starts breathing heavily, tears well up in her eyes, she knew Mrs.Darnell's pain, she knew what it was like to lose everyone you hold dear..but the fact that Mrs.Darnell's father not only knew, but had let his family die, and left Mrs.Darnell alone to deal with that monster by herself angered her, scratch that, it enraged her* Kylie: THAT MONSTER!!! *Mrs.Darnell shouts in shock, she wasn't expecting such a response* *Tears fall from the enraged brunette's eyes* Kylie: How could he do that to you!? How could do that to your mom!? How could he do that to his own children!? Mrs.Darnell: K-Kylie- Kylie: That piece of filthy scum, I'm not even gonna call him a human being, fed his children, along with his wife to a bloodthirsty monster, all to protect his pathetic ego! That stupid- *She tries to think of something to say, but all that comes out is an enraged scream* *She then punches the wall next to her* *Terrified for the girl's safety, Mrs.Darnell immediately goes to calm the enraged brunette* Mrs.Darnell: Calm yourself Kylie, I understand your anger, but now's not the time for that. *She thankfully manages to calm Kylie down* *Kylie let's out a exasperated sigh* Kylie: I hope your father has a horrible afterlife.. I hope that he is rotting for what he did to you, and your family..! *She says in an angered tone* Mrs.Darnell: So do I... Kylie: Wait a minute, if you knew that thing was out there, why did you send me to check on the bell? Mrs.Darnell: *sighs* I knew you wouldn't have believed me if I had simply told you, so.. I knew I had to show you.. Kylie: Heh! Well it definitely worked.. *Mrs.Darnell looked down in shame* Kylie: Well why are you doing something about it now? You've been dealing with this thing since you were a kid, why have you NOW decided to call for help? Mrs.Darnell: .....Because I didn't think anyone could help me.. __Flashback__ *We see Mrs.Darnell turning on all the lights in her house, and placing candles everywhere* *She then takes notice to a newspaper on the coffee table* *Mrs.Darnell: But then.. I saw your ad in the paper* *We see an ad for The Spiritual Hunters in the paper* *Taking a moment to think, Mrs.Darnell turns her attention to the telephone on the counter* *She then walks towards it, picks up the phone and rings up the number on the ad* *Mrs.Darnell: I knew it was a big risk, but at this point, I was desperate* *She puts the phone up to her ear* *We hear Minnie's voice on the phone* Minnie: Hello, this is The Spiritual Hunters' Headquarters. Mrs.Darnell: Y-Yes, I'm calling about a disturbance, there's something that wanders my property at night, if you could please come and take care of it, I'd be very grateful. Minnie: Ok Ma'am, The Spiritual Hunters will be there in a hurry. *End Of Flashback* Mrs.Darnell: I've been hiding this hidden threat for so long.. I've already warned my family about the beast, but it's not enough.. I don't know how much time I have left.. I cannot leave this world without that thing being gone too.. *A look of determination appears on Kylie's face* Kylie: Don't worry Mrs.Darnell, I will do whatever it takes to get rid of this creature, so you, and your family can finally have peace again. *We then hear the sound of the door slamming, along with some clattering* *Kylie immediately walks out of the room* Kylie: Lock yourself up tight, and do whatever it takes to keep yourself safe! Mrs.Darnell: I will. *And with that, Kylie rushes away* *She rushes downstairs, thinking the clattering was caused by the creature, only to see Mickey, Donald, and Goofy barricading the entire house* Kylie: Huh?! Donald: We can't let that thing in! *As they're barricading everything, Goofy notices Kylie standing on the stairs* Goofy: O-Oh hiya Kylie! How'd yer talk with Mrs.Darnell go? *Mickey and Donald turn their attention to Kylie as well* *Kylie then remembered Mrs.Darnell story, she remembered how her pathetic excuse of a father had knew about the creature's existence, and how regardless of it, he had continued to feed his family to it* *These awful memories cause tears to well up in Kylie's eyes* Kylie: *sniffles* *The boys express concern for their leader* Goofy: Kylie..? *Tears fall from Kylie's eyes as she begins to cry* *Goofy whines in worry, he then goes to comfort his beloved sweetheart* *Kylie slowly walks towards Goofy, she's visibly distraught* *She clings onto him as she continues to cry* *Goofy hugs his beloved, and pats her on the back* Goofy: There there... *Kylie takes a moment to let out her sorrows, but she slowly starts to calm down* Goofy: Feelin' better now..? Kylie: Yeah.. *She wipes the tears from her face, and let's go of Goofy* Kylie: We need to get that creature. *Mickey, Donald, and Goofy become horrified by her words* Mickey, Donald, and Goofy: WHAT!? Donald: Kylie, that thing almost got us! Goofy: It already got seven people! Kylie: Yeah, those seven people were Mrs.Darnell's family! *Mickey, Donald, and Goofy are taken aback by this, they weren't expecting a response like that* Donald: Well I'll be doggone.. Kylie: Mrs.Darnell's family was taken from her, and I'm gonna help her avenge them, she cannot leave this world peacefully, without that creature being gone as well! I know this creature is frightening, I know it makes you wanna crawl away and hide, but if we don't do something now, it'll continue to hurt innocent people! *Mickey becomes concerned, he doesn't wish for anyone to be hurt by this fearsome foe* *His look of concern changes into a look of determination* Mickey: Ok Kylie.. I'm with you. *Goofy nods his head* Goofy: Count me in, Kylie! *Donald takes a moment to think, but he ultimately comes to same conclusion as the others* Donald: I'm helping too. Goofy: We'll do whatever you say. Mickey: Yeah, just tell us what to do, and we'll get it done. *Kylie takes a moment to think, she then remembered what Mrs.Darnell had said about the candles* *Mrs.Darnell: The thing that had entered my home, hoping to wait out the light of my candle before the crack of dawn..* Kylie: The light of my candle.. *All the lights are on in the house.. it was dark when it entered her house as a child..* *Kylie's eyes go wide, she knows what to do* Kylie: That's it! *The boys turn their attention to her* Kylie: Boys, I have a plan. *Later that evening* *We see Kylie walking around the area* *She's looking around for the creature* Kylie: Hey creature, what the heck is this!? You choose now to become shy!? I thought you were a hunter, not a coward! *She then hears the sound of the bell* *Kylie gets herself ready, this time, she's prepared* *Everything seems ok at first, a few bell chimes here and there, but everything is fine* *We then see the creature behind Kylie, it's eyes are wide in excitement, and it's salivating* *It reaches it's hands out, ready to attack* *Kylie then turns around, and sprays it in the face with pepper spray* Kylie: Eat pepper spray jerk!! *The creature roars in pain* *Kylie takes this moment to run* *The creature slowly opens it's eyes, it's eyes are red from the pepper spray, and tears are streaming down it's face* *Once it's vision starts to clear up, and it's able to see the sneaky brunette, the creature snarls in rage, and immediately gives chase* *Kylie runs into the forest, she seems to be leading the creature away from the house* *The creature follows her into the forest* *We see Mickey, Donald, and Goofy working on a trap* *Goofy notices Kylie run into the forest* *A look of fear appears on his face* Goofy: Kylie! *He sees the creature run into the forest after her* *Goofy's pupils shrink, and he growls* *We then cut to the forest* *We see Kylie running around the forest* *We see the creature running after her, it's bell rings rapidly as it runs* Kylie: Oh gosh, oh gosh..! *She starts frantically looking around* *She runs and hides behind a tree* *We hear approaching footsteps, as well as chiming from the bell* *Kylie's face goes pale* *The creature snarls and slashes at the tree* *Kylie runs away screaming in horror* *As she's running, we hear the sound of the creature snarling, as well as the bell chiming* *Kylie then trips on a rock in the path, she grunts in pain upon hitting the ground* Kylie: *groans* *We see a shadow loom over her, as well as hear the same snarling sound* *Kylie reluctantly turns around* *The creature is seen standing over her* *Kylie screams in horror upon gazing at the creature* *Kylie: So I guess we're back to this part of the story, it looks like it's the end for me right? Think again..* *The creature goes to attack her, but we suddenly hear the sound of snarling, only.. it's not coming from the creature* *The creature turns it's head to the right, when suddenly, an unseen beast jumps at it, knocking the creature to the ground* *We hear the creature screeching in pain, as well as the sound of growling* *Kylie opens her eyes and turns her attention to the struggle going on* *She takes this opportunity to run* *We then cut back to Mickey and Donald, who're seen setting something up, although strangely, Goofy isn't with them* *We hear Kylie's voice in the distance* Kylie: Set the booby trap!! *Mickey and Donald turn their attention to her* Mickey: What!? *We see Kylie running out of the forest* Kylie: Set the booby trap!! Donald: What!? *Kylie runs as fast as she can towards the van* Kylie: SET THE FLIPPIN' BOOBY TRAP!! Mickey: Set it!? Kylie: Yes, do it, NOW!! *We see a beaten up, but very ticked off creature run out of the forest* Donald: No no no no! Take it that way!! *He starts directing her towards the right* Donald: Go that way!! Kylie: Just do it!! *And with that, the boys get back to work on the trap* *Kylie continues running towards the van, but the creature seems to be catching up to her* Kylie: Oh gosh no, oh gosh no! *The creature slashes at her, but Kylie manages to dodge the creatures attack* *Right as they're only a foot away from the van, Kylie trips on a rock, and falls to the ground* *She groans in pain* *A shadow looms over her* *She looks up to see the creature standing over her* *It grabs Kylie by her face and holds her in the air* *Kylie strangely doesn't try to break free* *The creature licks it's lips, and goes to bite into her* Kylie: Guys now! *Donald shines a spotlight onto the creature, causing the creature to screech in protest* *It drops Kylie onto the ground, and tries to shield itself from the light* *Mickey shines another spotlight on the creature from the other direction* *The creature continues to screech* Kylie: Hah! Not so tough in the light are ya!? *The creature backs away, it didn't think to look behind, it just wanted to get out of the light* *The creature gets it's leg caught on a trip wire* *The wire becomes loose, and it starts flailing around* *A shadow looms over the creature* *It looks up to see a cage falling towards it* *The cage drops on top of the creature* *The creature starts pounding on the cage, trying to get out* *Kylie walks towards the creature, and gives it a huge smirk* Kylie: That's for Mrs.Darnell, and her family! *The creature growls at her* Goofy: Gawrsh! What happened here? *The gang turns to see Goofy walking towards them* *He seems to be fine, but he has his coat closed, which is something he usually doesn't do* Donald: Where have you been!? Goofy: I was checkin' on Mrs.Darnell, I wanted to make sure she was ok. Kylie: Is she o- Mrs.Darnell: You did it! *We see Mrs.Darnell run out of the farmhouse, towards the gang* Mrs.Darnell: You actually got it! Kylie: I promised you I would help, and I was determined to keep that promise.. *she smiles at Mrs.Darnell* *Mrs.Darnell smiles at her* *A little while later* *We see Goofy and Donald loading the caged creature into the back of the van* *They close the doors behind them* Goofy: That oughta do it. *We see Kylie talking to Mrs.Darnell* Mrs.Darnell: I can't thank you enough for what you've done. Kylie: It was a pleasure, Mrs.Darnell, you deserve it after all you've been through. *Mrs.Darnell smiles at her* *Goofy calls Kylie from the van* Goofy: We're ready to go, Kylie! Kylie: Ok Hun! *She turns her attention back to Mrs.Darnell* *The two stare at each other for a little bit* *Kylie gives Mrs.Darnell a hug* *Although taken aback by this, Mrs.Darnell gladly accepts the hug, and hugs her back* Kylie: Well Mrs.Darnell, if you ever need help again, you know who to call. Mrs.Darnell: I do.. *And with that, Kylie walked towards the van* *The gang waved goodbye to their lovely client* Goofy: Goodbye! Donald: Bye! Mickey: Bye Mrs.Darnell! *They then got into their van, and drove off* *Mrs.Darnell waved to them as they drove away* *We see Kylie taking this moment to enjoy herself, she was finally relieved of the creature* Kylie: *It was nice helping Mrs.Darnell.. I'm glad we were able to help her finally get the peace she deserves.. man.. that was quite an adventure.... but there's still one thing that's bugging me..* *Her smile fades* Kylie: *What was that thing that saved me from the creature?* *We see the van drive off into the distance* (The End) Mickey and Minnie Mouse, Donald Duck, and Goofy Goof belong to ©Disney. Mrs.Darnell, and The Creature belong to Matt Dymerski. Kylie Dear belongs to Me.
Mickey And The Spiritual Hunters Ep 1: The Hauntin*It Was A Dark And Stormy Night* *A large, seemingly magical place is seen, it consists of a large, whimsical town, and a beautifully enchanting palace, it's light and wonder can be seen from miles away* Narrator: Welcome to Enchantasia.. It's a world of magic, wonder, and illusion.. *A dark area is seen* Narrator: Sadly..Things were not perfect in Enchantasia.. The world is filled with dangerous, deadly creatures, who're unlike the citizens of Enchantasia. *A pair of red eyes is seen* Narrator: Luckily for them, Enchantasia is protected. *A large, seemingly normal looking house is seen* Narrator: Protected by the bravest paranormal investigators around..They are named.. The Spiritual Hunters. *Inside the house* *Goofy is seen sleeping on the couch* *The phone starts ringing* Minnie: I'll get it! *She runs towards her desk, grabs the phone, and puts it up to her ear* Hello, this is the Spiritual Hunters Headquarters. ???: Yes..Do you chase ghosts? Minnie: Do we chase ghosts? Why yes we do. ???: Well, this house is full of ghosts.. Listen. *The sounds of ghosts shrieking blares through the phone* Minnie: *She immediately pulls the phone away from her ear* ???: Come quick! The old Gracey Manor. Minnie: O-Ok, right away ma'am... *She puts the phone back* *She grabs the microphone on her desk* We have a customer! *The sound of running footsteps is heard* Minnie: *She looks up* *Mickey and Donald run downstairs* *They turn and face Minnie* Mickey and Donald: We're here, and ready to go! Minnie: *giggles* Wait, where's Goofy? *The boys look around* Donald: *He sees Goofy sleeping on the couch* *growls* *He stomps towards him, and lift up one of his ears* GOOFY!! Goofy: *He screams, and jumps up in fear* *He lands on his feet* *He has a horrified look on his face* I-I-I'm here and ready to go! Donald: *He crosses his arms* ???: What's with all the screaming? *Everyone turns to see Kylie walk into the room* Minnie: We have a customer Kylie, the old Gracey Manor is being haunted. Kylie: Hmm..The old Gracey Manor huh? That place has been abandoned for years.. *She looks at the boys* Suit up boys, it's time to go ghost hunting. Mickey, Donald, and Goofy: Yes Kylie! *The sound of thunder is heard* *We cut to a different scene* *A silver colored van with The Spiritual Hunters logo is seen driving towards through the forest* *The forest starts to get creepier as the drive goes on, the trees become twisted and dark, and fog surrounds the area* *We see the silhouette of the mansion as the van approaches the destination* *The van parks in front of the gate* *The car doors open* *Kylie gets out of the van, and looks around the area* *The mansion has an eerie, foreboding aura to it, it's dark and damaged, and slightly overgrown with decaying vines* Kylie: Hm.. It's seemingly normal.. Donald: Are you kidding!? That mansion looks like something out of a horror movie! *Mickey and Goofy get out of the van* Donald: *gulps* *He peaks his head out of the van* Kylie: Ok...Does everyone have their equipment? Mickey: Yes Kylie. Goofy: Mhm! Donald: *gulps* Yes..? Kylie: Perfect! So we're all set. Donald: Um..M-Maybe I should wait out here, and guard the van. *He chuckles nervously* Kylie: *She walks towards Donald, and pulls him out of the van by his shirt collar* Donald: Wak! *The group walks towards the mansion, with Donald being dragged along by Kylie* Goofy: *He looks around* *There's five tombstone with "Hold my drink and watch this!" "He's dead, Jim." "Oops." "Thurs-Sat." And "Rest in pieces." written on them* Goofy: *gulps* I ain't sure 'bout this, fellers. Mickey: It'll be ok, Goofy, you just gotta be brave. *The group walks up to the mansion* *Mickey rings the doorbell* *A haunting bell chim echoes throughout the area* *Everyone has a pale look on their face* Kylie: Um.. Interesting doorbell.. Goofy: *gulps* Y-Yeah.. *The group walks into the mansion, Mickey pulls out his spectral scanner, and starts scanning the area for any paranormal activity* Mickey: Ok, it seems so far that this area is clear of paranormal activity, but sadly..this is just the entrance. *A look of pure dread appears on Donald's face, beads of sweat start to appear on his forehead* Kylie: Hmm...We might find the ghosts faster if we separate. Donald: WHAT!? Goofy: B-But Kylie, what if something happens to one of us!? Kylie: Mickey's got his gloves to protect him, Donald can suck up the ghost in his vacuum. *Donald holds the vacuum close to him* Kylie: And I've got the purifier with me. Goofy: Well all I have is a shield and dagger! Kylie: Hmm..... You're right, you can stay with me, Mickey, Donald, you go search the other rooms, we'll meet back here at the end. Mickey: Yes Kylie. Donald: *gulps* O-Ok... *Although I don't really want to..* *Kylie notices how scared Donald is, and gives him a reassuring smile* Kylie: Don't worry Donald, you've just gotta be brave, it doesn't matter how tough the foe is, as long as you have courage, you can face anything. *Donald seems taken aback by this, he wasn't expecting to hear such wise words* Donald: A-Alright, thanks Kylie. Kylie: Anytime. *And with that, the group went their separate ways* *Kylie and Goofy are seen walking down one of the hallways* *Goofy is seen observing some of the paintings* *All the paintings are twisted and deformed, they all shared a look of grimace on their faces* *Goofy whined in fear, understandably feeling frightened by the paintings* Kylie: Something wrong Goof? Goofy: Th-These paintin's sure are creepy.. *Kylie turned her attention to the paintings as well* Kylie: Yeesh! Talk about a bad portrait. *One of the paintings stands out from the rest* *It's a picture of what appears to be a hypnotist, he has messy hair and pale skin, his eyes were icy blue, and he wore a twisted grin on his face, his outfit consisted of a white collared shirt, a black button vest which had a blue button in the center, and a top hat with a blue ribbon around it* Goofy: *gulps* Kylie: Such class. *Goofy's eyes suddenly widen as he heard a sound coming from the left* *He turned to see a light shining down the hallway* *Goofy tilted his head in confusion, and decided to walk towards the light* Kylie: Let me see if my guide can tell me anything about this. *Kylie grabs her bag and goes to open it, when a floating string moves towards her* *The string has a coin attached to it* *Kylie immediately turns her attention to the coin, as she hears the sound of whispering* Kylie: What in the- *gasps* *A stunned look appears on Kylie's face, and her eyes turn a light purple color* *A whispery voice is heard* ???: This way... *The coin floats away* *Visibly under a trance, Kylie follows the coin* *A secret door in the wall opens, and the coin leads the entranced brunette into it* *Once Kylie goes through the door, the coin disappears* *Kylie is freed from her trance upon the coins disappearance* Kylie: Wh-What the?! What hap- *Before she can finish her sentence, Kylie is suddenly grabbed by a shadowy figure* *She tries to scream for help, but the figure puts their hand on the poor girl's mouth* *The wall closes up* *Goofy's POV* *We see Goofy walking down the hallway where the light was* Goofy: Hmm.. *Suddenly, the light disappears as quick as it came* Goofy: Huh!? *Goofy looks around, visibly confused as to what just happened* Goofy: Doggone, where'd it go!? *Goofy looks around for a few more seconds until he suddenly realizes something* *A look of dread appears on his face, and he gasps in horror* Goofy: I left Kylie alone! *Goofy immediately rushes back the way he came, terrified of what could happen to his beloved sweetheart* *The worrisome dog comes to a halt and gasps at the sight he's presented with* *Kylie's bag is seen laying on the ground, some of the belongings are scattered on the floor* Goofy: Oh gawrsh.. *Goofy bends down and grabs the bag* *He looks around, hoping to see Kylie, but there's no sign of her* *He starts whimpering as he puts the scattered supplies in the bag* Goofy: *groans* I was afraid this would happen! *He puts the bag on his should* Kylie! *The scared dog runs off, hoping he will be able to find his beloved* *Mickey's POV* *Mickey is seen scanning the area with his spectral scanner* Mickey: Hmm... *A dinging sound emits from the scanner* Mickey: Oh! *The dinging gets loud the more Mickey continues on* *The scanner seems to pointing towards one of the paintings* Mickey: Huh? *The painting doesn't seem too out of the ordinary* *Mickey takes a closer look at the painting* *The painting blinks* Mickey: *gasps* *He holds his right hand out* *The eyes of the painting disappear* Mickey: What in the- *A sinister chuckle is heard, the voice appears to be female* Mickey: Show yourself fiend! *He suddenly hears a piano playing in the distance* *Mickey immediately turns around and slowly follows the music* *The music gets louder and louder, until Mickey finds himself outside of a set of double doors* *Mickey slowly opens one of the doors to see a big, elegant ballroom* *The room is luxurious from head to toe, the walls are windows, the floor is shiny you could see your reflection in it, and there's a chandelier in the middle of room that's covered in rhinestones* Mickey: Hotdog... this has to be the most expensive room in the house. *He walks into the room and looks around* *Mickey sees something through the corner of his eye and immediately turns his attention to it* *In the corner of the ballroom sits a grand piano, which seems to be the source of the music, but what's odd is that there's no one playing it..* *Mickey glares at the piano and pulls out his spectral scanner* *He begins slowly walking towards the piano as the scanner starts to ding* *The dinging gets louder the closer Mickey gets to the pian* *As soon as Mickey approaches the piano, the dinging gets blaringly loud* *Mickey slowly moves his hand towards the piano* *Before Mickey can touch it however, the piano snaps at Mickey, causing the frightened mouse to shout and fall to the floor* *Mickey looks up, and his face turns pale from the sight he's presented with* *What was once a normal grand piano is now a slobbering monster with a large gaping mouth under the lid of the piano, a mouth which is filled with sharp, jagged teeth* *Mickey scream in horror before immediately standing up and running for his life* *He rushes out of the ballroom screaming* *The piano breaks through the door, it roars in rage before chasing after the terrified mouse* *Donald's POV* *Donald is seen cowardly walking down one of the hallways* *He's tightly holding onto the ghost vac, ready to catch any ghost that comes towards him* Donald: *groans* Why did Kylie have to make us separate?! *A bunch of eyes are seen in the shadows* *Beads of sweat form on Donald's head, and his teeth start chattering* *We see many silhouettes start to follow the frightened duck* Donald: She could've at least paired me up with Mickey like she did with her and Goofy, but no... I had to go alone! *He hears snickering behind him* *Donald stops right in his tracks, a look of pure anxiety appears on his face* Donald: *gulps* Do I dare turn around...? *Donald slowly and reluctantly turns around, only to see a bunch of ghosts staring at him* Donald: Hey! You're the ghosts! *Donald points his ghost vac at the ghosts, feeling somewhat confident in himself* *The ghosts smirk at him, before twisting their faces into horrifying expressions and screeching at him* *Donald screams in horror and immediately runs away* *The ghosts start laughing maniacally* *We see Donald running for his life* *The ghosts suddenly appear in front of him* *Donald immediately stops and turns around* Donald: *He's breathing heavily* I wish the others were here! *Donald sees a closet door, he stops and opens the door* *He hears the ghost's maniacal laughter in the distance* *Not wanting to get caught, Donald immediately runs into the closet and closes the door* *The room is pitch black, and all we see is Donald's eyes* *Donald takes this moment to catch his breath, he soon starts to calm down* Donald: I think I'm safe.. *We see multiple pairs of eyes appear* Donald: Those ghosts will never find me here.. *Donald then hears a sinister snicker, his eyes go wide in horror* Donald: *groans* ???: Boo. *Donald screams and rushes out of the room* *The ghosts start laughing again* Donald: *groans* Save my life!! *Goofy's POV* *We see Goofy walking around the house, desperately searching for Kylie* Goofy: Kylie! Where are you!? *No one responds* Goofy: Are ya 'round here somewhere!? If yer close by, let me know! *Goofy passes by an old suit of armor* *A pair of glowing eyes open inside the armor* *The helmet turns to look at Goofy* *Goofy keeps Kylie's bag close to him* *The suit of armor starts to follow him* *Goofy tries to stay brave, he thinks about how the others need him, and that he can't let fear wear him down...unaware of the sinister suit of armor behind him* Goofy: Oh.. I'm brave! *chuckles* but I'm careful... *The suit of armor goes to grab him, when it suddenly steps on a loose floorboard, causing a loud creaking sound* *Goofy stops in his tracks* Goofy: *gulps* *Goofy slowly turns around* *The person inside the armor laughs maniacally* *Goofy screams in terror and dashes away from the armor* ???: Huh!? *Goofy runs as fast as he can, which is definitely faster than the average mortal, he runs into one of the rooms, and slams the door shut* *Goofy takes this moment to catch his breath* Goofy: Gawrsh, guess I spoke too soon.. *His face goes white as he hears the distant sound of clanking footsteps* *Goofy whimpers quietly, praying that the fiend wouldn't find him* *The footsteps stop, Goofy slowly opens his eyes, hoping that the sudden silence was a good thing* *It was quiet....too quiet... until suddenly, the blade of an axe pierces through the door* Goofy: *yelps* *The axe starts breaking through the door* Goofy: YAAAAAAAAAH HOO HOO HOO!! *Goofy runs to the other room, and hides in the corner* *The suit of armor breaks through the door, holding a battle axe in their hand* *Goofy's body goes completely white* *The armor turns it's attention towards the frightened dog, and begins walking towards him* Goofy: No no no no no! *The person inside the armor starts laughing sinisterly* *Goofy cowers in fear* Goofy: *groans* Kylie where are you!? *Kylie's POV* *We see Kylie passed out on a wooden surface* Kylie: *groans* *she slowly opens her eyes* H-Huh..? *She tries to rub her eyes, but she quickly realizes that she's unable to move* Kylie: Huh!? *She looks around to see that her hands and legs are tied down* *Kylie tries to move her limbs, but to no avail* Kylie: What the heck!? *She suddenly hears a psychotic chuckle* Kylie: Wh-Who's there!? *Just then, a figure appears from the shadows* *It's the man from the painting, only he seems to be decaying as his flesh is a pale, rotten color* Kylie: *Her eyes go wide in shock and horror* Y-You're him, the guy from the painting, you're the hypnotist! ???: Indeed I am.. I am Pablo The Great, I performed for the family of this estate.. Kylie: *growls* You kidnapped me! *Pablo let's out a sinister giggle* Pablo: I did no such thing, I merely captured a flea brained imbecile.. Kylie: Flea brained!? *growls* Great, not only did you kidnap me, but you insulted me as well! *Pablo starts laughing psychotically* Pablo: You mortals are too much.. This'll be so much fun.. *Pablo walks away into the darkness* Kylie: Wh-What're you gonna do..? *At that moment, a bunch of ghost appear* Kylie: Ah! *The ghosts look very excited, almost as if they're ready to watch something happen* *Beads of sweat start to form on Kylie's forehead* Pablo: For many years, we've watched the ways of your modern world, studying all the weaknesses you mortals have.. *Pablo is seen pushing something towards Kylie* Pablo: We could just use the classics... waterboarding... the rack... rat torture... *Kylie's face turns pale* Pablo: However.. we have found that all those tortures are mere child's play, compared to the devices of your modern times. *The thing that Pablo was pushing towards Kylie turns out to be an old TV set* *A look of confusion appears on Kylie's face* Kylie: A TV? If I wanted to watch TV, I could just watch it at home. *Pablo chuckles at Kylie's comment* Pablo: You naive fool..it is what's on the television that'll make you cry for mercy..! *Pablo turns on the TV* *A title screen with the words "Love And Misery appear on the screen* ???: We now return to Love And Misery. *Kylie's face turns pale* Kylie: Oh no, not Love And Misery, I hate it..! Pablo: Oh you know this show.. *He says in a spiteful tone* Kylie: It's the worst soap opera to ever air on TV, who HASN'T heard about it!? *Pablo giggles evilly, a twisted grin forms on his face* Pablo: Enjoy.. Kylie: No..No no no! No please don't do this! Anything but this! *We can hear some dialogue on the TV, but it gets partially blocked out by Kylie's pleading* Kylie: Oh no, oh gosh no, no! NO!! *Mickey's POV* *We see Mickey running around the house* *We hear the loud thuds and sounds of the piano chasing him* Mickey: Oh gosh oh gosh! *A distant roar is heard* *Mickey turns around to see that the piano is getting closer to him* *Mickey screams in terror and fastens his pace* *He then sees a staircase in the distance* *Mickey immediately runs towards them, and climbs up the stairs* *The piano runs up to the staircase* *It looks a bit confused by them at first* *Mickey sighs in relief at the sight of this* Mickey: Good..he can't climb up the stairs* *The piano growls at Mickey and then props itself up on the stairway* *Mickey shouts in the shock, he was not expecting this turn of events* *The piano starts to forcefully make it's way up the steps* *Realizing he was no longer safe, Mickey immediately starts running again* *The piano roars in rage* *Mickey runs as fast as he can, but he suddenly stops himself* *We see that the path he took lead him to a dead end* Mickey: Oh no, oh no no no no! *He immediately looks back, only to see that the piano has destructively managed to get onto the next floor* *The piano then turns it's attention to Mickey* *It roars in pure rage, and then starts to charge towards Mickey* *Mickey shouts in terror, and immediately starts looking for a way to save himself* *As the piano gets closer and closer, Mickey suddenly remembers something, and looks down at his boots* Mickey: Aha! *He presses a button on his boots, and the lines on the boots light up* *Mickey then turns to the wall, and runs towards it* *As the piano starts to approach him, Mickey runs up the wall, and onto the ceiling* *The piano yelps in fear and tries to stop itself, but it was too late, it crashes into the wall, causing the piano to break* *Mickey is seen breathing heavily, but gives a sigh of relief seeing that his troubles are now over* *A spirit comes out of the piano, and flies away* Mickey: Well, that's one ghost down, hopefully the other's are doing a better job than I am. *Donald's POV* *We see Donald hiding under a table, cowering in fear* Donald: Oh gosh... *A taunting voice is heard in the distance* ???: Where are....you....? *Donald starts to hyperventilate* Donald: They're gonna find me, they're gonna find me..! *The spiteful laughter of the ghosts gets louder and louder* Donald: *groans* What do I do, what do I do..!? *He then remembers the advice Kylie gave him at the start of their mission* *Kylie: Don't worry Donald, you've just gotta be brave, it doesn't matter how tough the foe is, as long as you have courage, you can face anything* Donald: I can face anything.... I can face anything.... *A determined look appears on his face* Donald: Yeah! I CAN face anything! *Donald gets out from under the table, and gets out his ghost vac* Donald: Come at me you ghosts! *Outside of the room, we see the ghost approach the door to the room that Donald is in* *They snicker to each other, thinking this'll be a piece of cake* *One of the ghosts opens the door, but what they see leaves the ghosts terrified* Donald: Eat vacuum! *Donald turns on the ghost vac, and points it at the ghosts* *The ghosts shriek in horror and try to get away, but to no avail, all the foolish ghosts get sucked into the ghost vac* *Donald then it turns off and sighs in relief* Donald: I did it, I actually did it! And all by myself too! Oh wait till I tell the others! *Donald then runs off* *Goofy's POV* *We see the suit of armor approaching Goofy, holding a battle axe in it's hand* *Goofy is seen trapped in a corner of the room, whimpering in fear* Goofy: Pl-Please! Please don't kill me! I have a son, and a girlfriend I need to find! *The person inside the armor laughs psychotically, the armor holds up the axe, ready to chop up the frightened dog* Goofy: NO!! *Before the armor can strike, Goofy punches the armor in the chest, causing the armor to fall apart and fall all over the floor* *Goofy stares at his hand in shock* Goofy: Gawrsh, guess I really don't know my own strength. *A spirit comes out of the armor* Goofy: Huh!? *The spirit manifests itself into a physical being* *It changes into a ragged looking woman, with short messy hair, and pale decaying skin, she wears a torn lilac ball gown, there's a scar on her chest, and she seems to have long, claw like fingernails* *The figure chuckles sinister* *She looks at Goofy with a psychotic grin on her face, the deranged look in her amber eyes sends shiver down Goofy's spine* *The woman stands up, twisting and contorting her body in the process* Goofy: *yelps* ???: I see that you've answered my call.. Goofy: Wait, you called us!? ???: Why of course..how else was I to get you to come here? Goofy: H-How do ya even know who we are!? ???: *She chuckles to herself* We saw your ad in the paper.. Goofy: Oh, I forgot we sent that out. *The woman sharpens her nails on the wall* ???: It's been so long since we've had any fun.. oh I'm going to enjoy this... *She says in a creepy tone* *The woman shrieks at Goofy and charges at him* Goofy: *yelps* *Goofy dashes out of the way* ???: Huh!? *growls* *The woman slashes at Goofy but he jumps out of the way* *She snarls in frustration* ???: Hold still!! *She tries to slash at Goofy again, but he dashes out of the way* ???: What is this!? *Goofy tries to defend himself with his shield, but the woman knocks it out of his hand* Goofy: Hey! *The woman shrieks at Goofy and slashes his muzzle* Goofy: *yelps* *Goofy falls onto the floor* Goofy: *He whines in pain* *The woman slowly walks towards him* ???: What's the matter little doggy, can't handle being beaten a woman? *Goofy turns his attention to Kylie's bag, and reaches into it* *The woman giggles sinisterly, feeling eager to make mincemeat out of the poor dog* *Goofy growls and looks up at the woman* Goofy: I ain't beaten yet! *He pulls out the purifier and shines it on the woman* *The woman shrieks in pain as her body starts to shrivel and burn* *She tries to cover herself from the light, but to no avail* ???: St-Stop! *She sobs in desperation* M-Make it stop!! *She breathes heavily, before letting out a scream of pure pain and agony* *Her physical form withers away* *Goofy has a look of pure horror on his face* *He turns off the purifier* Goofy: Wow, I didn't know I had it in me.. *He stands up and brushes himself off* Goofy: I gotta go find Kylie. *And with that, Goofy walks away* *Kylie's POV* *We hear hysterical laughing, as well as some sobbing and pleading* *We hear Kylie's voice in the distance* Kylie: This is horrible!! *We see Kylie trying to break free of her restraints, she has tears streaming down her face* Kylie: Who writes this garbage!? They deserve to be FIRED for this level of incompetent writing!! *The ghosts are seen laughing themselves silly* *Kylie turns her attention to Pablo* Kylie: Oh make it stop Pablo, MAKE IT STOP!! Pablo: Hmm...Let me think...no. *Kylie sobs in desperation* *The episode on the tv ends* Kylie: Oh good..it stopped... *sighs* glad that's over... ???: Previously, on Love And Misery.. Kylie: Oh gosh NOT ANOTHER ONE!! *Pablo and the ghosts burst out laughing* *Kylie starts desperately trying to break free of her restraints* Kylie: STOP!! I can't take anymore of this!! *Kylie's voice starts to break as her pleading continues* Kylie: It's just been none stop suffering, MAKE IT END!!! ???: This is better than anything on this time's television! *The ghosts are laughing hysterically at the poor girl's suffering* Kylie: No! No stop it!! Stop!! *Kylie screams in agony* *Goofy's POV* *We see Goofy walking around the area* *One of Goofy's ears perks up upon hearing the screaming* Goofy: Huh, Kylie!? Kylie: STOP!!! Goofy: *yelps* Hold on Kylie, I'm comin'! *Goofy rushes down the stairs, following the sounds of his beloved screaming* *Once he gets down to the bottom, all that is seen is a door* Goofy: Huh? *He walks towards it* *Another one of Kylie's screams is heard* Goofy: Kylie! *Goofy tries to pull the door open, but the door won't budge* Goofy: *growls* Come on, open up! Dog! Gone! Door! Kylie: HELP!! SOMEBODY HELP ME!! Goofy: *He starts breathing heavily* *growls* I don't care anymore! *Goofy clenches his right hand into a fist, swings his arm back, and punches the door as hard as he can* *The force from the punch causes the door to break off its hinges, and fly across the room, hitting the wall on the other side of the room, shattering upon impact* *Everyone turns towards the doorway, shocked by the impact* ??: What the!? Kylie: Goofy! *Goofy is seen standing in the doorway, with a look of anger on his face* Goofy: *He growls at the ghost* Let her go! Pablo: *He laughs manically* Never! It's just SO much fun to torment this fragile soul! Kylie: *She struggles to break free* No! No please! No more! *Every ghost in the room starts laughing* Goofy: *His pupils shrink* *growls* You leave me no choice... *He reaches into his pocket, and pulls out the purifier* ???: Wh-What's that..?! Goofy: Begone you tormentin' ghosts! *He turns on the purifier, and starts shining the ghosts with the light* *The ghosts screech in pain, and start withering away one by one* Kylie: *gasps* Pablo: No..! No no no! *He turns towards Goofy* *Once all the ghosts have withered away, Goofy turns towards Pablo, and walks towards him* Pablo: You..! You've ruined everything! Goofy: Then we understand each other..now let my girlfriend go..! Pablo: *growls* Oh.. I would be delighted to do so.. *he reaches under the table* Kylie: Wh-What're you doing? Goofy: *He tightens his grip on the purifier* Pablo: But her time has.. *He takes a knife out from under the table* run out!! *He laughs manically* Kylie: *screams* *Pablo goes to stab her, but Goofy shines him with the purifier before he can do so* *Pablo screeches in pain, as his body starts to shrivel, and burn* *Pablo falls to his knees, tears falling from his eyes* *Goofy immediately runs towards Kylie* Goofy: Don't worry Kylie, I gotcha! Kylie: *sniffles* Ok.. *Goofy takes his dagger out of his pocket, and uses it to cut the ropes* *He then picks up Kylie, and rushes towards the exit* *Pablo looks up at them, his face painted with a look of maniacal rage* Pablo: *growls* *Goofy runs out of the room, and up the stairs* Goofy: *He stops at the top to catch his breath* *His pupils go back to normal* *chuckles* Glad that's over, a'hyuck! Kylie: *Her face is soaked with her tears, and she has a slightly horrified expression on her face* Goofy..did you just break that door down, with your bare hands..? Goofy: *His smile fades* *gulps* I-I-I'll-explain that another time, right now we've gotta get ya outta here! *Goofy walks away, carrying Kylie in his arms* *At the entranceway* *Mickey, Donald, and Goofy rush towards the exit* Mickey: Come on fellas! Let's get outta here! *Pablo suddenly appears in front of the doors, the doors slamming shut upon his arrival* *Pablo's body appears to be burned and mutilated* *Mickey, Donald, and Kylie scream in shock and horror* Donald: Oh gross! Pablo: *growls* No one has ever left this mansion, and nobody ever will! *He walks towards them* *Mickey and Donald hold onto each other, shaking in fear* Donald: No no no! Goofy: *growls* *Goofy reaches into his pocket, and pulls out the purifier* Goofy: Donald, get out yer vacuum! *Donald grabs onto the nozzle of his ghost vac* *Goofy shines Pablo with the purifier, causing him to screech in pain* Goofy: Now Donald! *Donald turns on the ghost vac, and sucks Pablo into it* *Pablo's screams fade, eventually stopping altogether* *Mickey and Donald stare at Goofy in shock* Mickey: Goofy.. Goofy: *He gently places Kylie onto the floor* *Kylie takes a moment to process everything* Kylie: Holy........... Strawberry shortcake! *She stands up and looks at Goofy* Goofy: You alright Sweetheart? Kylie: *She chuckles nervously* Yeah I guess. *sighs* I never wanna see Love And Misery ever again.. *They then hear a whispering sound coming from behind* Kylie: Huh? *They turn around to see all the ghosts from before, only they look much kinder and friendly* Mickey: It's the ghosts. *The woman that Goofy faced off with flies towards him* Goofy: *gulps* *She looks much happier, and is no longer monstrous and decayed* ???: Thank you... *And with that, the ghosts ascend, finally free of their tormented lives in the mansion* *The gang stares at the ceiling, amazed by what they've just witnessed* Donald: Wow.. Mickey: *sighs* I don't know about you guys, but I'm ready to call it a night. Goofy: *yawns* Me too.. Kylie: Let's go home. *As the gang walks away, we hear Donald bragging about how he defeated the group of ghosts by himself* (The End) Mickey and Minnie Mouse, Donald Duck, and Goofy Goof belong to ©Disney. Kylie Dear belongs to Me.
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BKASSASSIN Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2021  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello I need critiques for my arts. I want to see what I must study.
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00sketchy00 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2020  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Hello! I have a question. My art is a mix between traditional and digital art. The sketch and outline are traditional but the cloring is digital. What folder should I choose? "Others"?
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LadySeshiiria Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
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saltysi Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you guys Critique Original Characters?
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TheAdminsHub Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
Hello! ~TheAdminsHub here! 
We are looking for affiliates for the group #Rising-Artists as part of this event fav.me/d6jfs85 .
We suggested your group. We just thought you ought to know.
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Thepandagamer Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thankyou very much!
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no problem!
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AskWordGirl Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012
do you guys do fanfiction or no?
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Thepandagamer Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Sure! (sorry for the last reply). Just put it in literature :D
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AskWordGirl Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
it's fine
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